DUFFY ASSEMBLY
On Wednesday the 21st, 2016 we had a visitor named Mryon Simpsons. He came to our school to talk about his life and why reading is important.
He showed Tamaki primary school kids some facts that we did not know until he told us, He also told us what he does for living which is Cycling. He also told us that whenever he reads it helps him with what he does so he tells us to read because it can help us in our life.
He was telling us who fast a car can go across the school zone which they can only go 40 meters and bikes can go 110 per hour. So he asked us questions about what he talked about and whoever answered his questions they got to try on his stuff. He showed us his medals he which he won the Gold medal and a silver medal and after he showed us his stuff we got to ask questions about himself and things about so I want to say a
Hi hevani I loved your work, but try adding punctuation and make sure your sentences make sense
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ReplyDeleteI really loved reading your story because it had lots of detail. I think you could improve by re - reading your sentences to make sense.
Hi Heavani
ReplyDeleteI like the way you had lots of ideas and
photos and i like reading your story but
you need to put you stories in paragraph.