Persuasive Writing

Title: Should Children spend more time at school?

I think that children should spend more time at school, 2 reasons why children should spend more time at school

1. So that they can learn more then what they already know
2. So next year they can be ready for new stuff
3. Extra Curricula

And so they can get more credit in their learning

And because of these reasons we both are “FOR”.

Some believe that spending more time at school is boring just because they want to have more fun then just doing work,

For example kids these days don’t do much work because all they think about is giving up and having more fun than learning more.

But on the other hand I think that because children don’t know much I think that’s why children should spend more time at school or teacher's could just give children homework everyday.

Obviously it is true that children just think about free time instead of focusing on their work.

For example kids Copy+Paste information from the internet so then they can finish and have

free time but they don’t even know what the information means

because they don’t focus on work.

So I think that children should more time reading books.

 

I think that we should spend more time at school because we can have more time to do fun things as well like Art,P.E and all those can of things.

So in conclusion I think that children should spend more time at school because of these three reasons, I really hope you understand our reasons why children should spend more time at school.

By: Grace, Hevani.