Hola Hevani, This is great work I love how you have a beautiful background but you are still able to see the words cleary. One tip is to add more detail so maybe writing why we have to do these stuff in the bathroom and second tip is to re-read your sentences to make sure they make sense.
Hello Hevani, I love this work, and like Edith said I like the beautiful background you have hear and how you have a lot of tips here and how you actually put a toilet in the drawing which is what we are talking about
Hola Hevani, This is great work I love how you have a beautiful background but you are still able to see the words cleary. One tip is to add more detail so maybe writing why we have to do these stuff in the bathroom and second tip is to re-read your sentences to make sure they make sense.
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Hello Hevani,
ReplyDeleteI love this work, and like Edith said I like the beautiful background you have hear and how you have a lot of tips here and how you actually put a toilet in the drawing which is what we are talking about