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Monday, 27 March 2017

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Line basketball (Rm7 vs Rm 8)

It started on Monday 27 March 2017 when we heard the bad news, there came a message from the office, coming from the speaker. "beep beep beep attention please, everyone just to let you know that skateboarding will be cancelled".  After morning tea we decided to have PE since Kiwisport was cancelled.

I was surprised to see Room 8 joining us for PE. We walked downstairs and went outside. There we sat on the courts waiting for instructions. "Okay room 7 I want everyone to sit lined up boy girl boy girl" answered  Miss Ashley. A few moments later Miss Morrison considered that we followed the expectations. Then the game started. 

(Not finished.. but marked based on what was written).


Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R4
R4
R4
R4
R4
R3
R3
Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
 26
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
 3B

1 comment:

  1. Your story has everything it needs.. you just need to finish it on time!
    :)

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