💬Buddy Class Blog Commenting💬
IALT: Post a Postivite, Helpful, and Thoughtful comment on my buddy class blogs.
Kia Ora and welcome back to my blog! I know I haven't been blogging much lately and I just wanted to let you all know that I really am trying my best to find something to blog about or to complete my work to be able to blog it. Right now I will be sharing with you all my 2 blog comments that I have posted on my buddy class blogs.
Hi there Hevani, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you chose to insert the screenshots onto your blog and add information about it.
This reminds me of the many comments I do on lots of different blogs and today it is your blog.
Next time you could find a more creative way to share your work to make it more exciting.
Do you enjoy commenting on blogs?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Hey there Hevani ( really cool name btw )
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
Wow this blog is amazing!
I think that it is really helpful that you said the LALT because it helped me understand what the blog was going to be about. It was really cool that you added in the fair bit or writing at the top and not just sharing the screenshots but these screenshots did help a lot as well.
I think to make this better you could add some of your screenshots into a slide or drawing to make it look snazzy! And more creative I think that it would help bring a pop of color to your amazing your. But I still think that you did an amazing blog.
This reminded me of the times here in Rimu when we had to comment on a buddy of ours from the younger classes to help them because they had just started to do the Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu and Blogging thing and it is really cool to look at how much they have improved.
What is your favourite part about commenting on blogs?
Thanks!
-Maddie.
Hey Hevani,
ReplyDeleteI'm Mika, a year 8 from Yaldhurst.
Looks like you're pretty good at commenting, there's a decent amount of writing there. Don't know why but I like the layout of the blog too, with the popping red font.
Your blog is pretty great, but it would be nice if you used slides or any other website to open up your options to decoration. It's not necessary but a warm welcome would also be an improvement too.
Do you think my commenting skills are good? I hope they are. Like, it would be pretty funny if I startad mis speeling tings and fargot 2 us puntutin Any way, hope to see your next blog. Bye!
By Mika
Link to blog:http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/
Thanks for sharing such a great blog Keep posting.
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