Should animals be kept in zoos???

Title: __should animals be kept in zoo’s??__

Introduction:

Surely in this situation I think that animals should be kept in zoos because it is safer for both us and animals.

First paragraph:

O	In my opinion I think that it is safer for both us and animals.
R	Some believe that animals will be lonely in the zoos on the other hand animals also can communicate with other animals.
E	For Example instead of the animals playing by themselves and doing everything alone they have a friend inside to communicate with.
O	So I feel that animals should be kept in zoos.

Second paragraph:

O	I really think that animals should be kept in zoos because also scientist also need to study them.
R	Another reason, because if scientist don’t study animals it might dangerous and we won’t know if it’s safe.
E	Example, we won’t know if it's safe because scientist don’t study animals any more.
O	I think what’s best is that animals should be kept in zoos.

Third paragraph:

O	My final opinion is that it also could be safer for other animals too.
R	In this situation I think that also animals can eat other species of animals so we have a zoo to separate them both and it will be safer.
E	Example if an animal doesn't have any food it goes and hunts for other animals to eat.
O	I surely hope you see my point of should animals be kept in zoos.

Conclusion:

Summarise the 3 ideas	We should have animals in zoos because it is safer for everyone and every animal. I really hope you understand my reasons of animals should be kept in zoos.
Recommendations or reflections	I think that some of yous might be against and I respect that but I feel that I have to go for animals should be kept in zoos.