My Hauora
IALT: Write an explanation about my Hauora.
Today for Writing the Kia Manawanui Syndicate had to write an explanation writing explaining how our metaphor that we have created represents each of our 4 walls of self. Today using the S.E.E.E structure I wrote 4 paragraphs explaining how a rose represents my Hauora, here is my S.E.E.E structure writing.
Kia Ora Hevani, Ko Edith Toku Ingoa. I attend Rotorua Intermediate and may I say I found your Hauora very impressive! Your words were explicit and this writing really made me think about how I should keep my Hauora (Taha Tinana, Taha Wairua, Taha Whana and Taha Hinengaro) well taken care. I like how you have used your exemplar or you Hauora as a rose! One thing I think you could improve on is to make sure you re-read your work to make sure it makes sense! Other than that Ka Pai Hevani! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDelete- Edith.S :)