📝Writing📝

📝Writing📝

IAL: To write a poem about natural disasters

Today I have decided to share my poem about natural disasters with you. 

I wanted to know your thoughts about my poem, please just be honest and please give me feedback.

Here is part of my poem. I have been writing a poem about Earthquakes.

Tectonic plates slip

BANG!!

Earth’s surface begins to shake

As if the earth had a stomach ache

Along the surface there are cracks

SMACK!!

As the buildings collapse.

Caused by the tectonic plates

An earthquake begins

Destroying everything in its way

While earth starts to shake.

Lives, homes, and belongings is what earthquakes take.

People screaming

AH!!

Buildings falling

Boom!!

Run away before it’s too late

No not that way, here run straight.

Damage, destruction, and death is what Earthquakes have caused.

Leaving people nowhere to live

Hoping others will give

Anger and sorrow

Not sure of what to do tomorrow

And all you can hear

Is sound of sirens that fill the air.

Earthquakes are dangerous.

(Written by Hevani)

Please comment down below of what you think about my poem.